your own little beat

no, i did not read this one over. I'm not to happy with it.

Music is what you make it
not just white noise in the back ground
let it hold your heart and take it
Its melody will always be around
desertions not an option
so let your foot tep to the beat
let the notes take away the caution
you can't hold back from a song this sweet

Whats that you say?
You just can't hear it?
Well your not supposed to listen with your ears today
let your heart translate every hit
its an automatic reverberation
of emotions speaking out loud
thundering out across the nation
spreading throughout the crowd

No there aren't any lyrics
and no, the notes aren't written down
and it doesn't go by an specific tocks or ticks
but its presence is easily found
It talks to you and speaks to you
and lets your soul fly free
it lifts you up when your feeling blue
and sets a beat when your feeling crazy

So find your song
The melody may change
But that doesn't mean its wrong
so what if it sounds a little strange?
Dance to your own little beat
As it plays out through your head
let its strength be concrete
and let its joy spread...

Reviews

[Senseless whatever]

This is a good write. Compared to most of your other writes this one seems toned down. Maybe the vocabulary you use, not sure. But a good write still.

[*~Kristy~*]

In my opinion, it is not the best in the world, but it is still good. You said that you weren't happy with it, but I think that you should be. We all mess up at times, but that's what we learn from...
I do like the poem though.