Translation please

Translation please

A Poem by Shannon
"

doesn't matter what language you say it in....its all the same

"
te quiero
So hold onto me tight
Kiss me gently
as my heart takes flight
so I'm in love incidentally

je t'aime
let our hearts synchronize
let me feel your hand in mine
let me look deep in your eyes
And know whats mine is thine

Ich liebe dich
no i don't care how you look
all i care is how i feel
because baby this love belongs in a book
Don't listen when they say "its not real"

Ma armastan sind
I don't say it to fill a silence
Or because your upset
i say it to remind you of the balance
perfectly placed since we met

eu te amo
Do i care what they say?
Mind how they tease?
take not of How they scowl in dismay?
no, because its not them I'm looking to please...


© 2010 Shannon


Author's Note

Shannon
special thanks to google translator for this one lol

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"je t'aime" means I love you in french. And "ich liebe dich" in german. And the rest I'm not sure but just let me take a wild guess :) I like the message it sets and the style it shows it in. I've never had a language lesson in a poem before :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this piece. The use of other languages is both interesting and impressive. However, I get the sense that your french one doesn't quite fit the feeling I get from the English portions. "Je t'aime" means "I like" and I get the feeling that "J'adore" which means "I love" word fit better. Of course I might be wrong since I can only read the English and French lines, the others languages may tell a story that ties your use of "je t'aime" together with the rest of the piece. Overall, though, I found it to be a delightful piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice...and I don't speak spanish :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love your use of different languages, it brings more meaning to the powem. Very nice write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I love how you incorporate the use of other languages in this piece. It shows that love is universal. It gives me a warm happy feeling...and your rhymes are also amazing! Wonderful piece of writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cute heartfelt poem. Very well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


ah...this was inspirational and FRESH. very very fresh. it was something absolutely new and you wrote it with a great beat, rhythm and rhyme. overall just great piece. this deserves a 100 just for its uniqueness. not to mention, it was a fabulous poem. your words were so deeeeeeep.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice write. Glad to so you writing again.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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