doesn't matter what language you say it in....its all the same
te quiero So hold onto me tight Kiss me gently as my heart takes flight so I'm in love incidentally
je t'aime let our hearts synchronize let me feel your hand in mine let me look deep in your eyes And know whats mine is thine
Ich liebe dich no i don't care how you look all i care is how i feel because baby this love belongs in a book Don't listen when they say "its not real"
Ma armastan sind I don't say it to fill a silence Or because your upset i say it to remind you of the balance perfectly placed since we met
eu te amo Do i care what they say? Mind how they tease? take not of How they scowl in dismay? no, because its not them I'm looking to please...
"je t'aime" means I love you in french. And "ich liebe dich" in german. And the rest I'm not sure but just let me take a wild guess :) I like the message it sets and the style it shows it in. I've never had a language lesson in a poem before :)
I really like this piece. The use of other languages is both interesting and impressive. However, I get the sense that your french one doesn't quite fit the feeling I get from the English portions. "Je t'aime" means "I like" and I get the feeling that "J'adore" which means "I love" word fit better. Of course I might be wrong since I can only read the English and French lines, the others languages may tell a story that ties your use of "je t'aime" together with the rest of the piece. Overall, though, I found it to be a delightful piece.
I love how you incorporate the use of other languages in this piece. It shows that love is universal. It gives me a warm happy feeling...and your rhymes are also amazing! Wonderful piece of writing!
ah...this was inspirational and FRESH. very very fresh. it was something absolutely new and you wrote it with a great beat, rhythm and rhyme. overall just great piece. this deserves a 100 just for its uniqueness. not to mention, it was a fabulous poem. your words were so deeeeeeep.
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