How could our luck be so poor?

I actaully had to google "disney Princesses" to do this.

Cinderella's glass slipper shattered
into glimmering shards across the floor
her dress now bloody and tattered
How could her luck have been so poor?

Sleeping beauty never awoke
Her prince lay dead on the floor
and the Kingdom went up in smoke
How could her luck have been so poor?

Snow white never found the dwarfs
For they had locked the front door
And now she lay in the cold with not even a scarf
How could her luck be so poor?

Bell was tossed aside by the beast
thought she could change hime for sure
But he hadn't changed in the least
How could her luck be so poor?

And now the princesses of our fairy tales
Know better than to ignore
That everything ends in ails
How could our luck be so poor?

Reviews

[Gregory H.]

Dear Shannon,

This was a good poem...I liked it...It was a little diferent...I noticed some errors thought this poem...the 7th line has a capitalization error...“Kingdom” should be “kingdom”...the 11th line in my opinion need to be shorter...and the 15th line “hime” should be “him”...The beginings of your lines need to be fixed for capitalization...but overall a well written poem...

92/100

Sincerly,
Gregory

[Senseless whatever]

HAHAHAHA too cool. Me likes. Very similar to what I had in mind. Now i have to change and redo. Outstanding.