Audrina

This was picture prompted. It is about the greif a person suffers when they loose someone they love.

Memories of by gone love

bleed through the cracks of the floor

further away from him above

leaving her dry to the core.

 

Cobwebs cover her mind and walls

and wax does not last forever,

dusty hand prints from the fall

but no tears bring them together.

 

What we had we never forget

and time is no great healer,

and death she wished she'd never met

the lost and lonely sweet Audrina.

Reviews

[-Ink Artist-]

this has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme. dark but brimming in emotional substance. nicely penned. :)

~lori

[K.C. Zbryk]

a very dark poem full of emotion, and i think that this captures the grief that someone suffers. I am especially fond of the line Cobwebs cover her mind and walls... just a good write

[Jester_Salvador]

It's a good poem not the greatest, but saying that I really dug the line 'and wax does not forever' really gave me strong image of life's fleeting foot.

[Daytonight]

The rhyme and flow in this poignant poem leads one to feel the emotions even more keenly. Well done. Keep on penning.