first kiss

he he...take a guess, from the title. also an exercise in similes.

 

her soft moist lips pressing down firmly

on yours and

her tense undeniably-alive tongue poking timidly

partway into your mouth

are as natural as bare feet lightly stepping through

soft grass, each hesitant stride

bringing you one inch closer to

each other and

the warm, gentle stream

Author's Note

any comments, constructive criticism, common experiences...*lol*
for anyone who's wondering, yes, i admit it, i'm female and i kissed a girl.

Reviews

[perfectlymetiKulous]

lol @ "for anyone who's wondering, yes, i admit it, i'm female and i kissed a girl."
well, what do you know - me too! :)

Now, to the poem,
Purp (can I call you Purp?), this was absolutely, breathtakingly lovely. The imagery was perfect, the language, the flow... it was such a pleasure to read. Thanks for the read request. Feel free to send more! :)

[Purple Emo Angel Of Lov..]

OMG i love you purp.... Ok you know im straight so not in that way but this poem is sooo f****n awesome. And you are watching me write this review right now in the computer lab and yeah whatever. And i know Im weird and somewhat psychotic and a twilight freak but u are my friend anyway..



And i am a little upset that you kissed someone and didnt tell me but told PAT of all people!

[Anna]

I like this a lot! It was as soft and delicate as a first kiss of this nature can be! It was a pleasure to read! thank you for sharing it!