Double X

what's to describe? it's about being lesbian.

Straight girl,

you don't see me

watching you

wanting you

paled to insignificance

next to the ever-important

so-and-so

with an X-and-Y.

What's in a Y?

Can you explain to me

what I will never understand?

I'm an X girl.

Double X

stands for love.

Reviews

[No More]

Love this! So real, so honest. I like that it is so simply stated. Great job!

[fireblossom]

Y because we love you (Mickey Mouse Club)

Direct from heart to page.

Nice.

[Onyx Sky]

I love the line "What's in a y?"
I think it was a cool play on words from a classic writer.
Great job.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Short, sweet, and to the point! I really like how sincere you are, and the fact that you're so brave to be open in a close-minded world. ^^

The title is very clever, and the poem itself is full of honest curiosities. Excellent work!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Satchmo's Gal]

Liked it the first time, loved it the second. It's so real and down to earth it's scary. Keep it up

[Wildecat]

I like this poem, very well crafted and a pleasure to read.

[Alex Annesty]

I love this poem. It's direct and, despite its brevity, communicates the feelings of an impassioned individual.

With your permission, I'd like to send it to a couple of lesbian friends.