SOULMATES

SOULMATES

A Poem by Pragya Saxena
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A feeling or a bond, discovering what is hidden inside, committment of the souls.

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Burn my soul,
I'll go on knowing you.
Take away my memory,
Still I'd never be back to when I never knew.
Falling so hard,
and Falling so deep.
These flood of emotions hidden,
No longer I can keep.
Can't you feel? Can't you hear my sorrow?
Without you I can't dream of a happy Tomorrow.
You can take away my heart,
You can take yourself away from me.
Still I know there is a part,
Somewhere in myself it's you I can feel.
It's like you are a part of me myself,
You're the only book I notice among the thousands kept on shelf.
Come extinguish my eyes,
Still I'll go on seeing you.
Seal my ears,
I'll go on hearing you.
And without you expressing I can feel your pain,
Go ahead hide! I'll read your brain.
Without your feel,
I can make my way to you,
Without a mouth I can swear your name.
Thoughts, How they wander so free!
And mine how perfectly you tame!
Break off this bond and my heart will take hold of you,
Stronger than the grip of my hand.
Stop my heart! And my Brain will start to beat ,
And to your soul the emotions, the feels it will lend.
And if you ever try to burn it out again,
I'll feel you burning in every drop of my blood.
You're like those million hopes,
Those innocent minds hasve while building a castle of mud.
I don't know what this is called,
Among million words just a conclusion I get.
"Love" is just an understatement,
The word for what I feel for you,
They haven't discovered yet.!

© 2014 Pragya Saxena


Author's Note

Pragya Saxena
Well I'm not so good with words, so a simple language is used. :)

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Deep and heartfelt!
Great work,Pragya.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Good work, watch out for capitals, brain, Brain, why Tomorrow ?, Falling ? and avoid rhymes that just happen like pain and brain, as the reader is then not sure if this is rhymed or not, all in all a good poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 12, 2014
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Tags: Love, soulmates, feel, soul, togetherness

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Pragya Saxena
Pragya Saxena

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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