Crooked introspection

Sometimes the scars we own we aren't even the cause of.

And in scars we live, of what we bled,

those tears that remained ever unshed,

no voice to heed the words hooked in,

only whispers of chaos wearing silence,

for thoughts brewing of things we never dared to sin,

we'll remain lovers speaking under breaths,

scraping misery as our only truth on our fragile skin.

Author's Note

To everyone here, I wish you healing <3

Reviews

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

A truly haunting reflection on the pain we conceal. Sometimes, the deepest wounds often come from those whom we love the most. Your imagery here has touched me, so vivid, somber and real. I am delighted by how beautifully you captured the essence of raw and enduring nature of emotional pain and suffering.
I loved this poem, my dear friend.
I wish you healing too :)
Wishing you a beautiful day

[Poetic_Vixen]

First of all I apologize for overlooking your precious review, idk how I manage to be this clumsy! And second of all, your review has touched my heart and eases with it being felt by you, you looked pristinely through my words and I value it so much, I'm very grateful for this, dear Samiksha ❤️

[Poetic_Vixen]

Sameeksha* pardon me messing up the spelling, my friend :')

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

Please don't apologise, it is totally fine. You're most welcome and It is my pleasure to read your poetry, dear poetic vixen ❤️

Be happy and take care :)

[Poetic_Vixen]

It's a relief to know and you can call me Muskaan.

Have a lovely day my friend ❤️

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

Have a beautiful day, dear Muskaan

[AYVID N]

I read a lot of despair in your words. Your writing is so compelling here. Fate has forced chaos and tears on the lovers and circumstances make them helpless. It strikes a chord deeply. We've all been there some time. Picking up the pieces, nursing scars and still being hopelessly in love. This is a beautiful poem.

[Poetic_Vixen]

The part where you said '...nursing our scars and still being hopelessly in love...' is so true and I think we lovers will hold the legacy of this truth till the end of time. I'm happy you felt my poem Divya ❤️

[AYVID N]

Your words will stay with me, dear friend.
Please keep sharing.