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Moonlight softly echoes down

 

wrapping gently 'round them

 

as they lay a whisper breathes

 

two silhouettes among the trees

 

 

Reviews

[Siobhan MacIntyre]

What is it with everyone--they just can't let a simple poem be a simple poem. Fade to black, use your imagination, folks. That's why we're writers.

It sounds great to me: sweet, simple, a glimpse into a moment between two lovers. A moment is all we need to see (so back off, you voyeuristic lechers! LOL)

[Britteny]

I know why you are here!!! To write more wonderful poetry such as this!!!! I loved this little poem, my only complaint.....it was too short. Just a suggestion but you could extend on this or make it more than one part...I want to find out about the two silhouettes!