Dear David

I watch you from across the room
and I wonder...
do you even notice me
I hear you calling his name
and I wonder
does he even care for you

the sun shines
while the birds sing
I'm searching
for another opening
I don't know why
and I don't even care
but I am here

Dear David
I'm here for you
Like an angel, I must have been sent too
Give me your hand
and I'll keep your warm
while the world passes us by

The rain comes and hits your pale skin
you keep walking
while people still stare
I'm behind you, I wish you could see
I don't want to lose you
not again
I can't lose you

Dear David
I'm here for you
Like an angel, I've been given to you
Let the rain fall
I won't leave you again
I'm here for you
my friend

I wonder, if you can even see me
In love with him
yet, he barely knows it
They say it's not right
for two men and one night
So you lose it all
take those pills
and now you're gone

Dear David
I was here for you
It's a pity, I failed the rescue
I wish I could have a second chance
my friend
I miss you

Reviews

[Voice]

This honestly made me cry. This is a really great piece of writing and I think it sends out a message.

Voice

[BLACKCRUSH]

I'm at a loss for words for once..... This is amazing and so touching.

[LadyNaida]

Wow!

[BlessedLove]

I agree with blue rose! those saaame lines caught me. wow. this was really beautiful...thanks for sharing.

[Blue Rose]

I would like to say.....this is a very very beautiful piece of writing.....i really like the part that says:
I wonder, if you can even see me
In love with him
yet, he barely knows it
They say it's not right
for two men and one night
So you lose it all
take those pills
and now you're gone

Its a beautiful poem....

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

My father's name is David.
I really like this write!
This write is quite emotional and moving;
"Dear David
I was here for you
It's a pity, I failed the rescue
I wish I could have a second change"
Great work!
Keep it up!

-Elissa :D

[LostinKristina]

this was amazing.
very moving.

[Krazy On The Outside]

The flow was great. I really liked it.

[The High Poet]

Thanks for the read request! Over the years I have lost many friends and I could feel that pain just behind your words. Only if we could save them all!

Once again thanks
The High Poet

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i like this very much .... good write