The window of my empty classroom

the scene outside is the way we see it:)

The window of my empty classroom

 

The sun’s finest rays land

On my face and my eyes twinkle

The sunlight forms a chandelier grand

And welcomes me to the sky.

 

My classroom window

Is not big, yet manages to encompass me

When the sun let’s out his glow

To warm me

 

And when the sun has to hide

Beneath the dark clouds of dull rain

The window seems to smile and glide

As if welcoming the cool touch of the cloud’s caress.

 

I love my classroom when empty

Because then I am free to look outside the scene

Of normality and simplicity

And embrace the world like it isn’t.

Author's Note

i wrote this during my economics class while watching the scene outside change from sunny to rain:) please read and review:)

Reviews

[Revery]

I love this tender moment, like a respite or a moment to breathe. I especially liked the phrase:

"the scene
Of normality and simplicity
And embrace the world like it isn’t."

[dreaming dame]

:) Love it. :) I like the way you changed the scene, yet still kept the feel of the poem, soft, gentle. :)

[Poe Redd]

Wow... that sun is so warm, the window so comforting through your words. I love it!

[Priyanka Natesh]

Such a lovely poem Tanya! It is such an amazing feeling to just surrender to nature once in a while and leave the pesky world behind.. Very impressive. Thank you :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Oh i loved this how you wrote it to what you said in your Author's Note "while watching the scene outside change from sunny to rain" you did really well with the imagery, the scene, calming and beautiful, i love this, really enjoyed it.

[Princess LouLou]

Wonderful (:

[Daydreamer54]

Kinda deep and poetic! great write! ^^

[Becky C Strukamp]

We never know what may inspire our writings. You did a marvelous job with that inspiration. I loved this poem.

[Daft Jester]

Simple and powerful, a great combination. One mistake: the word let's in the second stanza should be lets, but other than that it was amazing! :D

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very beautiful and dreamy, very elegantly written :)