In My Heart

In My Heart

A Poem by theopenbook
"

somethings just can't be said aloud

"

In my heartJ

 

Do you feel something?

While sitting beside me?

Does your heart beat as fast as mine?

That love in my eyes can you see?

 

My eyes long to hold yours

And when we are close enough

Close enough so I can hear the music of your heart

Can you feel my love?

 

Your face never tells your story

But do you know that your eyes are a tyrant?

They whisper words to me that you yourself do not know

Oh! I wish your heart was silent.

 

Love is hard they say

But for me, loving you is easier

Easier than watching the light that your eyes lack

Easier than knowing if you’ll ever love me back.

 

I want nothing in return

But maybe I do

Just loving you is enough for me

I wish it was same for you.

 

I don’t know where life would bring us

Will we be together? Or apart?

But I know somehow; that

You will always be in my heart.

 

 

© 2011 theopenbook


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So nice..
just awesome:)
This poem is my type..i mean i can easily relate to
Love is so magical sometimes..i hate it when the person you love
didn't love you back as the same..
and we wait for them..that really hurts:(
i can only say be strong..everything is gonna be fine just
involve yourself in other things..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Love it!! Its a beautiful poem. Love can be magical.. and plus remember, the heart never forgets even if the mind does. =D

Posted 13 Years Ago


So nice..
just awesome:)
This poem is my type..i mean i can easily relate to
Love is so magical sometimes..i hate it when the person you love
didn't love you back as the same..
and we wait for them..that really hurts:(
i can only say be strong..everything is gonna be fine just
involve yourself in other things..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love tis from beginning to end. Beautiful! :)
And the style of writing is amazing! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Just loving you is enough for me
I wish it was the same for you.

Those lines are brilliant. This was a lovely song. It certainly brought a smile to my face, and who knows, maybe it'd bring a smile to the face of the person it's about.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Your face never tells your story
Easier than watching the light that your eyes lack
Easier than knowing if you’ll ever love me back.
I want nothing in return
But maybe I do
Just loving you is enough for me
I wish it was same for you.

this is a list of my favourite lines.

in all honesty when i first read it, i thought oh no, not another sappy love poem, Persoanlly im not a fan, but oh my goodness, this was amazing, i can feel the passion, it is amazing, you did such a wonderful jub. Well done.




Posted 13 Years Ago


Ah adolescent love. This brings back many memories, including getting laughed at. . . but that's a different story. Well done and excellent job taking a picture of the feeling.

Posted 13 Years Ago


loved this line:
"My eyes long to hold yours"
and this line...
"Your face never tells your story"...
lovely poem, nice title to fit it, loved the questions asked in the poem;
this is sweet as well, i like the bits of rhyming in it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very beautiful [: i love love poems haha i enjoyed it [:

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love the poem, font took a bit getting used to lol. But love the romance of the poem:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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