yaar, you are scientific as well as emotional... how could you.... oh my god!!!! it's so much emotional....
you really have a way getting into my emotions....
once I wrote a poem for my dad for Father's day, this one for mother's day...
I'm sure she must have been emotional too by reading this, and also I am sure she loves you very much as you do....
You both are lucky for this loving relationship... I wish this relationship never fades.....never ever.....
: )
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so so so much dear........this poem is very close to my heart..........thanks a lot!!!! :).. read moreThank you so so so much dear........this poem is very close to my heart..........thanks a lot!!!! :) :)
yaar, you are scientific as well as emotional... how could you.... oh my god!!!! it's so much emotional....
you really have a way getting into my emotions....
once I wrote a poem for my dad for Father's day, this one for mother's day...
I'm sure she must have been emotional too by reading this, and also I am sure she loves you very much as you do....
You both are lucky for this loving relationship... I wish this relationship never fades.....never ever.....
: )
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you so so so much dear........this poem is very close to my heart..........thanks a lot!!!! :).. read moreThank you so so so much dear........this poem is very close to my heart..........thanks a lot!!!! :) :)
Very nice Pushkar, nothing in the whole universe can replace our mothers with anything. The relationship of a child and mother is special and priceless forever.
"Mere paas Maa hai".. ye dialogur Indian cinema ka kaafi popoular raha hai. aur ye kavita padh kar wahi yaad aa gaya.. Wakai maa is the best. Maa tujhe salaam.
Excellen write :)
Bohot khubsurat ehsaas dilaya apne
Mai bhi aisehi kal likhne baitha tha
Par mujhe ehsaas hua kee
Kuch shabdo mai mere MATA ke voh khubsurti
Voh khushbu,voh sparsh ka ehsaas
Mai shabdo mai seemet nahi kar sakta
Bhagvan toh hazaro hain is desh mai
Bhagvan toh hazaro hain is desh mai
Lekin dikhenga aapko airf ek hee vesh mai
Unka aashirvaad hee duniya ko zuka deta hai
Phir bhi khud jhuk ke duniya koh utha lete hai MAAA.
BEAUTIFUL POEM
IT MADE ME A LITTLE EMOTIONAL
THANK YOU BHAI FOR SHARING IT.
Wah bhaisaab! Itna sweet hai ki muhje muskurathe chodhdiya.. Bahut acha laga yeh padh kar, sunn kar. One day, I wish I can write like this, in Hindi, telugu.. I'll get hold of you and make you read it even if it's torturous :D
Mere paas maa hai... Never gets old!!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
hehe jarur.......aap to isse bhi achcha likhogi.......bahot shukriya.......shukriya!!! :) :)
Khush Naseeb hain jinko ek itna bada ehsas dilati hain . Sachmuch ek ma ke samne Bhagwan bhi jhook jata hain.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
I am not basically a poet . I am a writer and will request to review all of my stories one after ano.. read moreI am not basically a poet . I am a writer and will request to review all of my stories one after another .
9 Years Ago
Sure thing Sir........just be a little patient with me.......i will read all of them!!! thank you so.. read moreSure thing Sir........just be a little patient with me.......i will read all of them!!! thank you so much for reading my work!!! :) :)
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Anyone can send me a read request but the review may take some time.
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