BYE ( Acrostic(#2) Senryu(#5) #1)

09-05-2015

because dead can't feel;
your poisonous soul don't stir
even hate no more.

Reviews

[GreenShoes]

Oh, this is brilliant! I have never seen, or thought of, a combination senryu and acrostic. I love this one! :)

[Visente Melchor]

Snap snap snap
Awesome work

[sapna sagar]

aashcharya.....kaise likh lete hain aap ....ek word se teen line ki itni power packed poetry....salute...

[AaronFreitas]

Powerful words my friend... good work!

[Jesse]

Smooth writing, nice impact.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot Sir!!! :) :)

[Jeyanthi]

ouch this hurt!!!!
so creative. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

haha......thank you so so much!!! :) :)

[Sindu]

Acrostic and Senryu.. like it very much! I should try these.
That is strong stuff, intense and short.. like a slap.. or a sting

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you must O Clever One........these are so much fun!!! thank you so much!!! :) :)

[Sindu]

Of course O exquisite thinker

[Pushkar Prabhat]

naah that doesn't stick........but you are always right O clever one.........i agree :P :P

[Sindu]

that sounds weird..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

just like me!!! :) :)

[R Smith]

nice combination Pushkar, you're fast becoming an expert with this style, bravo :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! thank you so much Sir............i am hooked on this style.........all thanks to you.....this is so much fun!!! :) :)

[Jamestown]

Another fine piece of work!
Very creative and expressed well:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Sir!!!! :) :)