senryu#4

09-05-2015

 toxic for your life  ?
why, isn't destruction  pretty,
you  enjoy   fireworks  !

Reviews

[Roland Petrov]

It's pretty destructive and destructively pretty. The last line is genius! People do talk about going out with a bang.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

awesome review Sir.......thank you so much......really appreciate your kindness......!!! :) :)

[AaronFreitas]

Nice work... powerful words... the format helps it :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much Aaron......apologies for the late reply......!!! :) :)

[Jesse]

Another impact Hiku very nice.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot Sir!!! :) :)

[micky]

Wow...beautiful........:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Micky.........!!! :) :)

[Sindu]

It all depends on the mindset and the perspective, I guess. A tinge of sadism muffled in the casual air of "ignorance" and "illiteracy".

Neat write and message! Liked this one.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

True..........thank you so much.............for finally liking something, i wrote! :P :P

[Sindu]

"finally liking something"? I always did. Quite a number of your stuff..
Welcome.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

hehe........only a number of them??? not all??? :(

[Sindu]

Ofcourse! No one can appreciate everything one writes.. also I did not read everything you wrote :P
I liked almost all of what I read.. may be all

[Pushkar Prabhat]

arrey.....senti ho gayi aapto memsahab! majak tha!!! :P :D

[Sindu]

-_- -_- no senti yaha peh.. :P

[Pushkar Prabhat]

oh great!!! :) :)

[ManasaC]

little words of wisdom...Nice

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much.......!!! :) :)

[R Smith]

I like that, the simile between destruction and enjoying fireworks has a neat about face for us, the bangs and blasts of the night sky, is it war or party, very neat Pushkar :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much Sir.........!!! :) :)

[Jamestown]

So many follow the wide path to destruction, I try not to, narrow is the road
to paradise, and I don't like those kind of fireworks if you know what I mean:)
Well written piece of work! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

i know what you mean.........i follow that path only in my writings.......too scared in real life.....haha.......
thank you so much Sir!!!
:) :)

[Jamestown]

U R welcome, keep up the awesome work:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

:D :D :D :D..........