Senryu#2

01-05-15

On normal chair this,

I laugh, cry, dream, worry, plan.

Will i leave, ever?

Author's Note

leave or live..........
as Shakespeare did not say "what's in the pronunciation?"

Reviews

[Jeyanthi]

But sitting and staring at ceiling would be more interesting during study time ... !!!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

naah i just enjoy that during exams.......!!! :D :D

[mattavelli]

Why Get up? Seems an interesting spot.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

haha......that is a legit option..........Thanks a lot!!! :) :)

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
You got to leave the comfort of the recliner to really
live and enjoy life, great job friend! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

True.........thank you so much.........!!! :) :)

[wordman]

sounds like my recliner,and me dreaming

[Pushkar Prabhat]

haha........Awesome!!! :) :)

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Pushkar Prabhat]

someone down voted your review..........i guess that is 'him'.

[AaronFreitas]

This is an awesome Senryu brother... the only way to get out and live is sometimes to leave. Beautiful words Pushkar :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot Aaron........ :) :)

[R Smith]

another excellent senryu Pushkar, your on the way to success :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much Sir................!!! :) :)

[Ayank Chourasia]

Life goes full circle around this and things become more scary

[Pushkar Prabhat]

how true.......thank you so much.........really appreciate it!!! :) :)