Lost Steps

====Lost Steps====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 31-03-15

 

Lost in;

Fog of opinions,

          With compromised vision,

          And disrupted breathing.......

 

Here nowhere,

On the edge of this line:

          An imaginary boundary,

          Between imaginations.

 

i have to maintain a stand,

Against this crosswind

        Of conscience and morals

 

i have to walk along....

          straight and strong.

 

i feel sand

Beneath my feet.

It is here,

i want to belong.

 

Across is not unknown

Unfair it is wet cement,

An inch a step apart

Forever to lament......

 

Unfair this side

Washed by waves,

No step however strong,

 Stays for long......

 

i stumble, fumble....

But keep on....

 

And when the sun rises,

Shinning judgements all over....

Looking back all you see.....

Are some erroneous steps

Frozen in time.....

Reviews

[Ashwin Thakur]

Light when concentrated becomes a single ray of light which burns everything
That same light when letted free on a sunny rainy day creates a beautiful rainbow
Its the same light but why they have two personas
Its your light in the path of your destiny
You decide if you have to burn down your path to destiny or spread rainbows
Surely great poem brother i didnt expected any thing less from you:):):)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! beautiful review.............thank you so so much for your generous words.........really appreciate it!!! :) :)

[KelWriter]

Very reflective indeed. I like the flow of the poem and the way you penned it. Very nice!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much........for this kind visit and generous review!!! :) :)

[Confuser]

Fantasies....morality: straight and strong: stuck somewhere in the middle with all those decisions: You say the sand is where you wish to stay; maybe a safe place. A look back at the choices we make in life; very good descriptions Pushkar...Temptation is always there lurking.
Unfair this side

Washed by waves,

No step however strong,

Stays for long......
It's all great writing: I think I like the aforementioned best...Thank you so much. Dale

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Dale.........very generous review......your words always motivate me........!!! :) :)

[Confuser]

You're welcome Pushkar. Love your writing, always fantastic!

[Confuser]

Re-Read: Imagery is profound: You are so talented!!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you again Dale.........you are so kind to me!!!! :) :)

[Confuser]

Pushkar: You're welcome but you are so very talented!

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write, very creative and thought provoking!
you always seem to keep my mind busy with your word
choice, really enjoyed this piece! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much Sir.........so glad my words could occupy your mind for a while.........!!! :) :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Wonderful write, left me puzzled with the existence (mine). Thanks for sharing.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! thank you Gurleen......so glad this left you thinking.........i wish you solve that puzzle soon.... !!!! :) :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Hehe yup :)