Paper, Pencils and Your Memories

====Paper, Pencils and Your Memories====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 25-03-15

 

Fuelled by your memories:

    The darkness in my pencils.......

          Fought all night, with the white paper.

 

With each stroke,

        i undid the knots

          On the piles of emotions and feelings.

     i broke the spell

          On the spells of longings and despair.

 

Hand and fingers guided by my heart.......

        i traced,

           the sparkle in your eyes.....

               the soft liveliness of your cheeks......

                   the luscious invitations of your lips.....

                         the enchanting glory of your hair.....

 

And,

 

Now,

     This picture.....

          Pretends to be you.....

                   Teases my love,

                        Taunts my loneliness,

                             Punishes my desires,

And leaves me broken,

                                        open,

                                                and burning........

 

Till eternity......

 

Far an embrace of you.....!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I have known the places in the poetry.
"The darkness in my pencils.......
Fought all night, with the white paper."
I had dark taverns, darkness and pencil and paper as my only friends. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Sir for this beautiful review...........really means a lot!!! :) :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Leena Madhuri]

wow! lovely! yeah its amazing! :) :) :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you thank you so much kind poet...........!!!! :) :)

[KelWriter]

This is very nice indeed. The feeling of yearning and missing someone. I again love the mix of fonts and the way you portrayed this. You will be a legendary poet someday my friend.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! that made me smile, ear to ear and beyond........may your wish comes true!!! Thank you so very much!!! :) :)

[KelWriter]

It is true. I have a similar poem entitled FeeCF so I could connect to this one greatly. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

that is great.......i will check out "FeeCF" soon......thank you so much once again!!!

[Prashant Pandey]

lovely. Nice structure, attractive title. With each line a frame of emotions of lonely heart was running on my laptop screen. :-)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Waah!!! thank you so much...........!!!! :) :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

The title and the poem both are artistic, I love the way you wrote this, really liked it

[~]

I can picture the speaker struggling to pour out the perfect words that would ease the soul, and cool the heat of the longing embers. A crafty, astute and brilliant write Pushkar.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!! thank you so much............!!! :) :)

[R Smith]

you are the most artistic poet Pushkar, combining magnificent writing with grand design, another sparkling poem loved the story within, keep this stuff coming my friend :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! OMG.........thank you so very much Sir.........it means a lot...........you and your poems inspire me..........!!! i will keep them coming :P :) :)

[R Smith]

That's good to hear Pushkar :)

[Sindu]

Art in poetry comes to life with your words.. These words. Beautiful ( I do not use that word unless I mean it owing to its overused nature :))

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! thank you so much..........such an honour sindhuji!!! :)

[Sindu]

no 'h' in my name buddy ;)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

oh sorry bhawawesh me beh gaya...... :P

[Sindu]

I'll let it pass this time :P

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are so kind......hail sindhu.....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

s**t....sorry.......kind one.....

[Sindu]

It's k puskar.. I am kind

[Pushkar Prabhat]

HOW COULD YOU......I WILL NOT TOLERATE THIS........dropping the 'h' from Pushkar.........unacceptable....

[Madhu]

Well, I felt like "WOW", the entire concept is amazing and the font and style of writing keeps one very interested! :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! so glad you liked it that much.........thank you so much!!!! :) :)

[Madhu]

My pleasure :)
Keep Writing!

[nazia]

I liked this thing what you call "jugalbandi" in Hindi. the work of your feelings, paper and pen together..
it is an intense emotion of love that you display here. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wow........if i ever attempt this in hindi.......i will use that word for sure........
thank you so much!!! :) :)

[Sami Khalil]

You guide the heart to the embrace of her and you picture the enchanting glory is about to happen...An excellent one...:)....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Sami!!! :) :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....