Paper, Pencils and Your Memories

====Paper, Pencils and Your Memories====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 25-03-15

 

Fuelled by your memories:

    The darkness in my pencils.......

          Fought all night, with the white paper.

 

With each stroke,

        i undid the knots

          On the piles of emotions and feelings.

     i broke the spell

          On the spells of longings and despair.

 

Hand and fingers guided by my heart.......

        i traced,

           the sparkle in your eyes.....

               the soft liveliness of your cheeks......

                   the luscious invitations of your lips.....

                         the enchanting glory of your hair.....

 

And,

 

Now,

     This picture.....

          Pretends to be you.....

                   Teases my love,

                        Taunts my loneliness,

                             Punishes my desires,

And leaves me broken,

                                        open,

                                                and burning........

 

Till eternity......

 

Far an embrace of you.....!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I have known the places in the poetry.
"The darkness in my pencils.......
Fought all night, with the white paper."
I had dark taverns, darkness and pencil and paper as my only friends. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Sir for this beautiful review...........really means a lot!!! :) :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Penny]

A good pen picture of a picture.. Lol. Very nice poem. Beautifully described the process, the emotion and the person too. Perfect .

[MomzillaNC]

This is often how I feel when I'm painting or drawing!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! so glad you could relate.........!!! :) :)

[MomzillaNC]

:D :D

[Gene]

Great poetry............ Enjoyed.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much!!! :) :)

[ManasaC]

Your poem is like the art work on a Canvas!!! Brilliant!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! thank you so much.........really appreciate it!!! :) :)

[Sea Light]

I love this poem. It's lovely and artistic formated with flow. Keep it up!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much.............!!! :) :)

[Isabel25]

This is such a splendid write Pushkar. I could almost picture you drawing that girl in this poem. A poet and an artist. Not bad..not bad at all.
This is such a tender and playful poem. And the form really makes it stand out :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! thank you so much kind poet............means a lot!!! :) :)

[micky]

Beautiful format
this is a true piece i love how this poem is like a real situation
well done Pushkar:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! thank you so much Micky..............so glad you liked it so much!!!! :) :)

[samanthaashley_]

I completely agree!!

[fattycbreezy52]

this is beautiful.Very richely designed and fabricated !

[fattycbreezy52]

richly*designed

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much........really appreciate you stopping by and kind review!!! :) :)

[Kousika]

great work great man.. I am moved by the lines of your heart.. The lines orderliness creates some waves in the mind.. couldn't come out of that yet..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! thank you for such passionate response..........hope you don't drown in those waves.........lol..........thank you again..........!!! :) :)

[Kousika]

I am already.. :)))

[Pushkar Prabhat]

oh god......you must be mermaid........!!! :) :)

[Kousika]

Mmm.. by your words in the poem..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

such an honor......thank you!!! :) :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

pushkar prabhat SIR ki jai ho . pushkar prabhat SIR jindabaad . it was realy vry heart touching SIR

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much........very unique response!!! really appreciate it!!! :) :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

m also unique

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you must be.......!!!! :) :)