Paper, Pencils and Your Memories

====Paper, Pencils and Your Memories====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 25-03-15

 

Fuelled by your memories:

    The darkness in my pencils.......

          Fought all night, with the white paper.

 

With each stroke,

        i undid the knots

          On the piles of emotions and feelings.

     i broke the spell

          On the spells of longings and despair.

 

Hand and fingers guided by my heart.......

        i traced,

           the sparkle in your eyes.....

               the soft liveliness of your cheeks......

                   the luscious invitations of your lips.....

                         the enchanting glory of your hair.....

 

And,

 

Now,

     This picture.....

          Pretends to be you.....

                   Teases my love,

                        Taunts my loneliness,

                             Punishes my desires,

And leaves me broken,

                                        open,

                                                and burning........

 

Till eternity......

 

Far an embrace of you.....!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I have known the places in the poetry.
"The darkness in my pencils.......
Fought all night, with the white paper."
I had dark taverns, darkness and pencil and paper as my only friends. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Sir for this beautiful review...........really means a lot!!! :) :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[1VJ]

I like the layout, and your emotions are perfectly spoken. I think you meant 'for' an embrace of you. And it's 'fueled', other than that, bravo!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much for you kind visit and generous review...........really appreciate your suggestions......however, fuelled is correct and yes that 'far' should be 'for'........but after uploading i kind of liked the expression 'far an embrace of you'........hope these didn't ruin this poem for you.
thank a lot.......
happy reading!!!!
:) :)

[1VJ]

Ahh, I stand corrected, I've always written it with one L, but you're right. :)

Also, I think 'far an embrace' works perfectly too. You're welcome, I enjoyed your work! :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks again..............!!! :) :)

[Monchie]

Broken relationships can be hard to get over, and can cause a lot of problems... Still, you must move forward! :) Well written.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks you so much............i really appreciate it!!! :) :)

[Monchie]

You are welcome :)

[Ardra]

Very nicely done... the way you have formatted it is also nice.
liked these lines
With each stroke,
i undid the knots
On the piles of emotions and feelings.
i broke the spell
On the spells of longings and despair.
felt it was so much more than a painting :) such strong emotions
keep sharing your good work with all of us

[D]

Was it really so long ssince I've read you? Lol. sorry.

Beautiful write, about missing someone, and looking at the picture, the memories, is just making it seem worse. well penned.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much......!!!! :) :)

[D]

my pleasure :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

wow... this is so desperate... and filled with desires ..... I liked this very much...
As I told before, you've an amazing talent... And this title says everything...
nice rhythm...all that missing was some repetition and background music..........
very sweet!!!
Ani : )

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks you kind poet...........!!! :) :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

you're welcome..

[Bina]

So beautiful I really love this poem so much. Thank you for sharing

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thanks a lot............!!!! :) :)

[Arjun Singh]

Very intriguing....
Not only was d poem very gud, bt d style of writing was also commendable...
Lvd n enjoyd it....!
:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thanks bhai..........

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Very enchantingly romantic..!
A surreal moment of passion and longings, aptly described..
Enjoyed it!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank a lot........so glad you enjoyed!!! you are too kind!!! :) :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

I believe that- "True talent deserves appreciation."

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you again...........thank you very much!!! :) :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are Welcome!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

:) :) :) :).........

[Arunima]

PERFECT...yaar,this one's too good...i mean WOW!...kya likhu samajh na aa raha...loved it,bro...simply loved it..aap mahan hai..:)