Mere iss dil ko tumhare kavita ke sahare chod dun...
Wah!! kya khoob likha hain...
Appne Jo soch ke ye kavita likhi hain wo taarif ke laayak hain...
I do not have enough words to describe...
Mujhe bohot hi achi lagi....
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
bahot bahot shukriya...........itni taarreef sun ke behad khushi huyi......!!! :) :)
Wow! This is a master piece and my favorite among all your work I have read up till now.
Second and third stanza jus blew my mind away!
How love can make you and break you. And distance is just numbers.
I am not very well versed in Hindi and it never bothered me. Now after reading this I wish I was better.
A phenomenal, outstanding piece!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
OMG i am so happy that my poem could inspire you to learn the language better..........i think this .. read moreOMG i am so happy that my poem could inspire you to learn the language better..........i think this is the biggest compliment. thank you very very very much Jyoti...........truly appreaciate it!!! thank you so much.......:) :)
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