Sculpted Tears

===Sculpted Tears===

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 12-03-15

 

Sculpture of ice,

Huh....just frozen tears;

Though, don’t leak, from eyes,

        Neither flow.......

 

i brittle, sustain:

love.......longings.........pain.

Your, sweetheart.........tears, thaw.

My lonesome..........solitude, warm.

Our, dear..........memories, heat.

i don’t cry, just sweat and bleed........

 

i cold, restrain:

love.......longings.........pain.

But,

In routine,

Unsuspected........unseen.

 

Butterfly belly & my heart,

Play catch and run.

Caught amidst,

My longings ignite, burn.

 

Polaroid draws, emotions sway,

i give in to the kiss, and just melt away........

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

love, longing, pain....
I loved the words... especially those lines of tears, solitude and memories. Although, I haven't ever told you something related to this in my life, but it is much relatable for me...
You may have written out of imagination but unintentionally, you wrote the words of my heart... thank u my friend....
Thanks a lot!!!
Ani : )

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot Ani............glad you liked it!!! :) :)

[Leena Madhuri]

cool! i give in to the kiss, and just melt away........ wow love it

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a bunch!!! :) :)

[prajakta]

wow,the poem really draws the reader in!good piece...:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much!!! :) :)

[Swati Sharma]

the title in itself is so captivating...and the "love.......longings.........pain."....awesome :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much!!! :) :)

[Confuser]

I love it Pushkar: Sculpture of ice, Huh....just frozen tears; Though, don’t leak, from eyes, Neither flow....... Tears/Ice: Brilliant! The "slow dance" of words building to the end and also love the repetition
love...longing....pain:
Butterfly belly & my heart,
Play catch and run.
Caught amidst,
My longings ignite, burn.
And the ending (along with the Title...SMART!!!) Polaroid draws, emotions sway, i give in to the kiss, and just melt away........The Game of Love...so beautifully written. I love it all. Thank you so much!!! You are so talented. Dale

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!!
thank you so much Dale...........you are awesome!!! :) :)

[Confuser]

You're welcome; but you are awesome!!

[nazia]

Love the way you frame your work.. and off course the kiss is always a melting emotion.. one that carries you far far away....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much..............very much appreciate your kindness......!!! :) :)

[armin]

Loved the creativity and use of colours.
Beautiful imagery.
You have a very unique style of writing my friend.
Well done.

armin. ...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much............i am so glad you find my writings unique!!! :) :)

[Rounak Jain]

Amazing creativity, so fluent and intense with emotions. scattered.. yet well connected... I brittle, sustain part was the best. thanks for sharing

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much...............!!!! :) :)

[MomzillaNC]

A soul melting kiss. I like the way you've used color in this one.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thanks a lot Momzi!!! :) :)

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Deepika]

I love your creativity! :) freely flown intense words. Great job pushkar(y)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much..............!!!! :) :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Ahhhh a kiss that melts the soul....a kiss that is remembered long after it is finished. The varied emotions in this poem are so real and so powerful. Very well written. Lydi**

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much..............really appreciate it...............:) :)