Sculpted Tears

===Sculpted Tears===

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 12-03-15

 

Sculpture of ice,

Huh....just frozen tears;

Though, don’t leak, from eyes,

        Neither flow.......

 

i brittle, sustain:

love.......longings.........pain.

Your, sweetheart.........tears, thaw.

My lonesome..........solitude, warm.

Our, dear..........memories, heat.

i don’t cry, just sweat and bleed........

 

i cold, restrain:

love.......longings.........pain.

But,

In routine,

Unsuspected........unseen.

 

Butterfly belly & my heart,

Play catch and run.

Caught amidst,

My longings ignite, burn.

 

Polaroid draws, emotions sway,

i give in to the kiss, and just melt away........

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

love, longing, pain....
I loved the words... especially those lines of tears, solitude and memories. Although, I haven't ever told you something related to this in my life, but it is much relatable for me...
You may have written out of imagination but unintentionally, you wrote the words of my heart... thank u my friend....
Thanks a lot!!!
Ani : )

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot Ani............glad you liked it!!! :) :)

[girly]

A salute to you, Sire! ;)
Love, longings, pain..how beautifully have you described them!
Also liked the way you used visual effects. Give me some lessons about them when you're free ;)
So, to sum up, LOVED YOUR POEM A LOT!!!!
~Love, Millie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

haha sure........i can give lessons anytime you want.......just give me a few hour notice......coz i will have to prepare.......lol
Thank you so so much............so glad you liked it so much!!!
:)

[D]

I can relate so much... Beautiful write my friend.
The pain of losing a loved one... It's being unbearable.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot Kossuth......... :) :)

[D]

You're welcome (:

[Purvesh Khamankar]

You have a way of words sir,you really do. Your poems are liberating.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!! huge compliments..............thank you so much for such generosity........ :) :)

[Penny]

Tears hold importance in our life, for too much crying makes you look weak and not crying at all makes you weak and hollow. Well done.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well said............thank you so much Penny......always great to see you!!! :) :)

[Penny]

My pleasure. Its great to see you too.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very emotional ride in your words.
"love.......longings.........pain."
Above lines can be true. When love turn sour. Pain can come. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much.................really appreciate it!!! :) :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Maumil Mehraj]

The title made me read it, it was beautiful
And the poem was breathtaking! nice and flowing.Thanks for sharing
Maumil

[Pushkar Prabhat]

sshhh.........don't say that......other poems will feel bad you now...........lol :D :P
Thank you so very much.................really appreciate it!!! :) :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

Hahhaa! my pleasure!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

:D :D :D...........

[Dear Aurth,]

It made me numb :| ..... Awsom ... love.......longings......pain... Could totally relate ...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much..........so glad you could relate............!!!! :) :)

[Dear Aurth,]

I cold ... I brittle .... Caught me there

[Pushkar Prabhat]

hope you thaw and strengthen........ :) :)

[Dear Aurth,]

i give in to the kiss, and just melt away........ Hehehe ....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

love longings pain............are really funny that way..........

[micky]

Wow Pushkar this is really painfully beautiful thats the only way to describe this piece i am amazed and in love with your word....
Well done friend:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much Micky...............it really means a lot!!! :) :)

[micky]

Well it is truly amazing Pushkar.... you inspire me

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much.......you are so kind!!! :) :)

[Kousika]

Where do you choose the words pa, it is really making me mesmerizing.. Your love , the flow all are captivating.. each of your poem moves me deep into love.. your love person is lucky ya to have such a great person..who is very precise yet effective..deep and more effective..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!! you made my day brighter........thank you so much for your generous review and passionate response.......thank you so much......it means a lot!!!! :) :)

[Kousika]

ha ha ha.. :))

[Pushkar Prabhat]

:) :) :D :D...........