I've got a confession. at first, I've just scrolled over, collecting ythe words in red :)
found all of the essentials that make up a "normal " (if you can call anything emotional normal. lol)
relationship. hopes, promises, love, and when it ends .. pain. a big deal of life is all about these, and your poem to me speaks of a little more than just "love "
beautiful write. :)
also noticed that the first line... the letters in red spell out "love"
your observations are spot on..........nothing goes past your keen eyes.........Thank yo so much Kos.. read moreyour observations are spot on..........nothing goes past your keen eyes.........Thank yo so much Kossuth.......means a lot!!! :) :)
8 Years Ago
My pleasure :)
8 Years Ago
oh... lol jus got chapter six online, and writing number 7. :)
Patience, pain and hope are obvious in love...Although I don't know much about it but I can sense the feelings here...
How something begins with hope, undergoes pain, love and finally ends with a new hope...
This is so true. Like it depicts us..all humans... Their tenderness and emotions, when they start with something, it follows with hope, it's end, obviously with a new hope for the next choice....
Promises when one makes is not always capable to keep. But some keep and they are described as good ones.. Somewhere promises are made to be kept. With these, also there is hope, one always hopes to keep it....
very good thoughts introduced here...
Very good Push!!!
Ani : )
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
WoW!!!! thank you so much........for such beautiful review.............means a lot !!!! :) :)
I've got a confession. at first, I've just scrolled over, collecting ythe words in red :)
found all of the essentials that make up a "normal " (if you can call anything emotional normal. lol)
relationship. hopes, promises, love, and when it ends .. pain. a big deal of life is all about these, and your poem to me speaks of a little more than just "love "
beautiful write. :)
also noticed that the first line... the letters in red spell out "love"
your observations are spot on..........nothing goes past your keen eyes.........Thank yo so much Kos.. read moreyour observations are spot on..........nothing goes past your keen eyes.........Thank yo so much Kossuth.......means a lot!!! :) :)
8 Years Ago
My pleasure :)
8 Years Ago
oh... lol jus got chapter six online, and writing number 7. :)
Honestly, I cant write a review as deft and immaculate as Sindu wrote. The poem is amazing. twisting and turning entrapping emotions beautifully. Felt like I am listening to some narration from the movie 10000BC.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
WoW!!!! these words mean a lot to me.......thank you so much for such kindness......!!! :) :)
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