Lunar Love

Lunar Love

A Poem by Pushkar Prabhat
"

lunar cycle of love

"

====Lunar Love====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 25-01-2015

Hope, fades first;

 

on the night,

we conceive new dreams.

the night,

of the new moon;

 

it begins.

 

love awakens,

from hibernation,

integrating:

      crescent

            per

                crescent.

 

emotions spring.

 

among neaps of

anxiety, excitement and fear,

some longing, love and desires,

                                     pack into one.

on the night of Mōhalu.

 

moon leaves.

 

reuniting under,

the silver rains of Hua;

lost lovers sail ashore.

spring blooms romance.

      

fulfilled, Hope shines.

 

affirming the old ones,

new promises are made.

moments devoured,

                  oblivious to realised fantasies.

until tide floods eyelids.

 

ships afloat.

 

on Māhealani,

for reason and obligations,

to fish for the future,

all sails must set sail,

 

while patience wanes.

 

pain consumes,

the gibbous of love,

disintegrating:

      crescent

         per

            crescent.

 

it ends.

 

watery eyes awaits the night,

                  to conceive new dreams.

lost, restless souls await,

                  the tide of the new moon.

 

and then, Hope fades.

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© 2015 Pushkar Prabhat


Author's Note

Pushkar Prabhat
reference links:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lunar_phase
http://www.imiloahawaii.org/57/
http://home.hiwaay.net/~krcool/Astro/moon/moontides/

i would love to learn more about your opinion on this poem.
by the way this is my first poem of 2015.

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I've got a confession. at first, I've just scrolled over, collecting ythe words in red :)

found all of the essentials that make up a "normal " (if you can call anything emotional normal. lol)
relationship. hopes, promises, love, and when it ends .. pain. a big deal of life is all about these, and your poem to me speaks of a little more than just "love "

beautiful write. :)
also noticed that the first line... the letters in red spell out "love"

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

8 Years Ago

your observations are spot on..........nothing goes past your keen eyes.........Thank yo so much Kos.. read more
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8 Years Ago

My pleasure :)
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8 Years Ago

oh... lol jus got chapter six online, and writing number 7. :)



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first but one of the best poems written by you.. good work.. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!!! :) :)
This write kinda tugs,
Digging the format.
Awesome!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much............i really appreciate it......!!! :) :)
Patience, pain and hope are obvious in love...Although I don't know much about it but I can sense the feelings here...
How something begins with hope, undergoes pain, love and finally ends with a new hope...
This is so true. Like it depicts us..all humans... Their tenderness and emotions, when they start with something, it follows with hope, it's end, obviously with a new hope for the next choice....
Promises when one makes is not always capable to keep. But some keep and they are described as good ones.. Somewhere promises are made to be kept. With these, also there is hope, one always hopes to keep it....
very good thoughts introduced here...
Very good Push!!!
Ani : )

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Pushkar Prabhat

8 Years Ago

WoW!!!! thank you so much........for such beautiful review.............means a lot !!!! :) :)
Anindita Janhabee

8 Years Ago

you're welcome!!!
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I've got a confession. at first, I've just scrolled over, collecting ythe words in red :)

found all of the essentials that make up a "normal " (if you can call anything emotional normal. lol)
relationship. hopes, promises, love, and when it ends .. pain. a big deal of life is all about these, and your poem to me speaks of a little more than just "love "

beautiful write. :)
also noticed that the first line... the letters in red spell out "love"

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

8 Years Ago

your observations are spot on..........nothing goes past your keen eyes.........Thank yo so much Kos.. read more
D

8 Years Ago

My pleasure :)
D

8 Years Ago

oh... lol jus got chapter six online, and writing number 7. :)
A new style of writing about emotions and dreams. I also like the design Prabhat. You made me feel it's equally important.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

thank you so much..........i am so glad you liked the presentation so much......:) :)
you're presentation is always eye catching!! very well written!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent job...:).......

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honestly, I cant write a review as deft and immaculate as Sindu wrote. The poem is amazing. twisting and turning entrapping emotions beautifully. Felt like I am listening to some narration from the movie 10000BC.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

WoW!!!! these words mean a lot to me.......thank you so much for such kindness......!!! :) :)
beautiful poem + mesmerizing presentation..
very well done
keep it up:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

thank you so much.......!!! :) :)
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A beautiful poem and skillful presentation. Well done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much kind visitor!!! really appreciate it!! :) :)

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