Claustrophobic Ambitions

My dreams are afraid of closed spaces.

Claustrophobic   Ambitions

copyright@pushkar prabhat 29/12/2014

i

tiny self

~Acknowledge~

unimportant as i may,

i know! i know i am, was, will; be nothing.

but nothing is not what i want

'anything' can not satisfy

demands i have none

just desire:

fairplay.

i

appreciate

resistance like challenges.

favouritism doesn't cause me to spill,

but an active conspiracy deserves my wrath;

deserves every man, an opportunity, O fate!

don't limit me to one room, same walls.

untie me, stop,

remove this

blindfold.

i

can hear,

these walls closing,

stop, stop, make it stop; don't crush my

Claustrophobic Ambitions

for my dreams are big, huge, GRAND!

don't squeeze them in the corner

of immediate necessities;

of worldly duties;

Stop!

i

warn, though,

insatiable lust this,

knows nothing about proportions.

potential is the motto & persistence a strategy

resilience is my revolution.

all force shall amplify

i beseech thee

O fate,

Stop!

i

humble being,

~Acknowledge~

but you don't know my dreams,

fear shall only feed their survival instincts.

let the doors flung open; let breathe.

Stop! Stop don't crush my 

precious, rebellious

claustrophobic

ambitions.

Reviews

[Mavericks]

Loved the Theme. Creativity at it's Best. And, I Respect your Urge for Freedom. Being Yourself is the Best thing one can do for himself, for Each Soul has it's own Life Path. Opinion's of other's are like Onion's. Nothing Else really Matter's. Remind me of that Song. It's my Life =)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot kind poet............really appreciate it!!! :) :)

[Mavericks]

...........................:) :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Pushkar, your This piece has something different about yourself, telling about your desires from your heart...
True desires of a bird comes out, asking to open the cage, so that it can fly....
"You have to walk through the reality to fly over the dreams..." remember this and go ahead!!!
Anindita : )

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!! thank you so much for such beautiful review dear..........really really means a lot!!!! :) :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

anytime for you!!!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

:D :D :D :D

[aLittlePain]

I'm so glad I returned the favour and visited this piece. This is rather brilliant, some sublime lines, and your word choices are gold. Very nice.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!! so glad you liked it.............thank you so much!!!! :) :)

[D]

Hehehehe. The format is nice, and creative.
The tone is sometimes rather cute ... Asking good old "fate" like a little kid asks his grandpa. lol.

Well penned my friend. :)

We all... (referring to the revolutionary people, not the cattle just living in masses) have big, or small, but worthy dreams, and no matter the dream... Sometimes the world is...Well...just too tight to fit them in.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well said my friend........so you found your way back, finally...........thanks a lot............glad you had fun with this..........!!! :) :)

[D]

yep. :) I'm gonna be on a reviewing spree again, in the hopes that some will be kind enough to read me :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

i saw you just uploaded 2 stories..........i will review them both by tomorrow...........looking forward to great reads........... :D :D

[D]

just one actually, they're two..excuse me now three short chapters in a book I'm probably adding number four today...Oh and feel free to skip chapter one, it's jus gay folks making out. lol :)
thanks though (:

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you f.....i already reviewed it............glad to know that now...... ..
new book.......congrats.....on the good beginning.........
:) :)

[D]

thank you so very much (:

[shardha sharma]

The way i feel once in a while.Amazing one. You are a good writer indeed !!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much...........really appreciate you saying that!!! :) :)

[Sami Khalil]

Just remarkable...:)......

[Linda alexander]

A profound writing, well displayed message, loved it

[Rounak Jain]

Electric. It reminds me of my self from not long ago. a much needed reminder. :)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

MARSTERPIECE!!! I mean!!! So well written!!

[MsJewel]

wow...love, love, love the message here - move forward no matter what - there is strength in your words and they are so inspirational, quite uplifting!...and the form you chose is the perfect creative vehicle for your wise words.

:) Julie