halo.

halo.

A Poem by Pushkar Prabhat

halo.

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 2014

Halo,

Of an old self.

Self that was

Great

Could have been:

Corona,

i, dreamt of a crown.

Crown i envied

Unfortunately

Should not have become:

Nimbus,

To wash away.

Away in rain

Ephemeral

   Leftovers of becoming:

    Halo.

© 2014 Pushkar Prabhat


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i love the presentation, i see in this you recognize the halo as a great soul, you dream to become such but envy is a sin and somehow your wish is washed away in a tide of envy in the form of rain and you are left unable to attain that desire, i may be wrong but then its good to throw in an interpretation of our words, thank you for this work :)

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Great Piece of work, wonderfully presented

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

Thank you...............:) :)
Aesthetic interpretation of the halo.
Of a self that transpired to the one, one wishes to be.
Indeed this feels ephemeral. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

thank you so much..........!!!! :) :)

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Pushkar Prabhat
Pushkar Prabhat

Bhagalpur, India



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