Departure Blues

====Departure Blues====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 2014

 

from WORLD transit,

i will depart, too.

i fear not:

Destiny!

 

My absence,

              Shall wither, the saplings of wisdom.....

              Shall no more protect, my thoughts written on the sands.....

 

That:

i Fear!

 

 

Abandoned houses, empty rooms,

Hardly my worry!

 

i hope the ideas and principles i petted,

Shall find new homes.

 

The fantasies and achievements, i dreamt,

Shall find new dreamers.

 

And my deepest of the deep desires,

See the light of the day.

 

 

 

BUT

 

i have no seed to sow,

i am still fighting the waves to get ashore....

 

my rented room prays of solace

my ideas and principles bring me disgrace.....

 

my dreams are nothing; just achievement fantasies.

My desires reside deep into defamed alleys....

 

HOW???? HOW???? HOW???

i worry, i fear.

 

My train: On time!

 

 

 

Breathe.....

Deep...............

Deeper....................

Release!

 

 

CHANGE:

Avaracadabra!!!

Reviews

[Arnav swaminathan]

Thougt provoking.... The fantasies and achievments I dreamt,shall find new dreamers...my favourite lines...great work

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much for appreciating.............. :) :)

[Arnav swaminathan]

Looking forward to read your works...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

expecting reviews!!! :P :p :)

[Arnav swaminathan]

I will....:-)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

.............:) :) :) :)

[Confuser]

......................................................................nuts

[M.A.Rathore]

With a different look the poem counts a modern world under dilemma alongwith to be done or not to be done. Surely life is going. We have nothing to do for a good cause.
What a nice line!
My absense shall wither....on sands....
The lay out of the poem is also superb.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much sir.....................it means a lot!!! :) :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome always ..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

...........:) :) :)

[MomzillaNC]

Whimsical and thought provoking.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thanks a lot Momzi............. :) :)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

.................... :) :) :) :)

[Confuser]

I love this! What a telling poem, with so much imagery; it's like a great story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. My absence,

Shall wither, the saplings of wisdom.....

Shall no more protect, my thoughts written on the sands..... AND IT JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

wow! thank you so much for your kind words................so glad you loved it!!! :) :)

[Confuser]

y/w...................................................................

[Pushkar Prabhat]

.....................................................:)))))))))))

[Confuser]

Just drop me a request if I can ever read something. I'll do my best. I am learning so much. You really are a great writer. I'm just beginning.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you write like a seasoned writer.....i am amateur............but as they say, we can learn from anyone!
i will send you some RRs right now..............and i will make sure i read some of your works too!!! :) :)

[Confuser]

I have read this again, and just phenomenal! My library it goes. So many great metaphors.

[Briana O'Connor]

Love the depth withing the words and the added whimsy. Very thought provoking and fun at the same time. Nice write.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much............... :) :)