Flaws....

====Flaws....====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 2014

 

TRY...........

Don’t obsess!

 

Perfection:

An illusion;

Is a tell tale to wonder.......!!!

 

BE......

Flawed, cherish!

 

Beauty:

A perception;

Is projection of character.......!!!

 

Ideal.....

Could be chased; bordered.

 

But a flaw:

In all its glory..........

A true miracle to ponder......!!!

 

Ahead.....

Ahead you move.

Flaunt......

All your flaws!

Like those dimples,

On perfect cheeks:

Everything.

Is Beautifully Flawed!

Author's Note

i had this idea and i started working on it.....this was the end result. I might reattempt this. Until then, sharing this.......suggestions invited.

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

This was so different and I absolutely LOVED it. The format and the message. You are correct, beauty is a perception and everything and everyone has flaws, whether they are clear to see on the outside, or deeper in their character. But no matter what, we are still beautiful creatures. Well done!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much Ashira.......so glad you liked it!! :) :)

[Sindu]

A crazy good creation! That gave me a lot to think about personally. Flaw is a trademark of certain someone. It cannot be taken. Duplicated, maybe. Owned, no. Beauty and perfection are illusions which differ for everyone but unfortunately we, Homo sapiens, compare and compare some more.
I do not see any reason why you should reattempt this.
The format, short and to the point, strikes deep. Every word seems to have its place.
Loved it! :)
Thanks for sharing.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wow!!! such insightful and generous review!!! Thank you so very much!! to be honest.........i don't think i could recreate this again but at the same time, this is not all i wanted to say.........maybe this is what i meant by, being beautifully flawed!!! Thank you again......:) :)

[Sindu]

You're welcome! Yes, guess it applies to this too ;)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

yes, maybe!! :) :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Every time you come up with something new. A beautiful write. Loved the last part. Thanks for sharing :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you for appreciating......i try! :) :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

You are welcome

[Sanjh]

It's great Sir, I've never read any poetry in this format. It's nice, it gave me new ideas. Wonderful message to accept all your flaws as you accept your beauty . I liked it a lot...:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thanks a lot.......:) :)

[Eleanor]

I really loved this one! People often feel having flaws is bad. But no one is perfect. Everyone has flaws and those flaws make them beautiful.
It doesn't matter how you look from outside. Its your inner-self that matters.
Maybe that girl is not pretty. But her heart is the prettiest you would ever find . She is loved not because of her looks but because of who she is. Your message through this was great.
A few lines can say so much. :)
Impressive writing :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

wow! thanks a lot for such generous words!!! :) :)