muskura.....alwidaaa!! (in HINDI LANGUAGE)

NOT in DEVANAGARI SCRIPT

====Muskuraa,   Alwidaa......!!!====
copyright@pushkar prabhat, 2014

Na awaaz di na khat hi likha.

Na tune mujhe koi di hai wajah.

Leke sapne mera tu saath gaya,

Jo wade kiye the wo bhool gaya......

Mai karu to bhi tumse karu kya gila.....

Hai aashiq tera ab bhi dil ye mera.....

Bus iltezaa ek hi tumse ek hi dua....

Khush rahe tu rahe meri yaadon se judaa.

 

Na aansu mujhe de ab, na koi sadaa.

Na hi saansein koi teri khushbu ki tarah.

Jis tarah dil ka har kona soona ho gaya,

Jis tarah tere bin jeena maut ban gaya.

Pal gujaare tere sang jo mujhko de bhula,

De bhula ki kabhi tu tha bhi mera....

Akhiri ek mujhko tu de ja saza....

Muskura......aake keh ja mujhse alwida........

Muskura....khilkhila.........tujko, hai alwidaa.....

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Reviews

[Arunima]

beautifully penned down .....this is "soothing"...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

oh!!! bahot bahot dhanyavaad!!! :) :)

[Arunima]

WELCOME!(mere bhai..)

[Destiny Dreamer]

WHAT!!! OMG! It's AWESOME! It's something I love to read! So deep feeling... I loved it beyond Ur imagination! U know what I would suggest U to write songs lyrics! Hindi songs! U would really do it GREAT! U wrote every single word with PASSION! I love it, Love it truly! I really want to read more of Ur Hindi Poems! ^_^

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!! thank you for such passionate response.........yes i write songs......though none posted here.....well if you want to read more i will send you some read requests........
thank you again............you made my evening......!!!
:)))))

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yeah Sure I would LOVE to! :) And U are WELCOME ^_^ :)

[Rounak Jain]

nice. filled with grief. thanks for sharing

[Pushkar Prabhat]

shukriyaaaa..............!!! :) :)

[Penny]

Aakhri line sabse achi lagi.. dil ko chhoo jane wale kavita, kisi ki yaad mein doobe lafz jab ek sath aate hain jo aisa hi jadoo hota hai, jaisa yahaan hua hai. Bahot khoob!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

shukriya shukriya!!!

[Penny]

Pleasure is mine.

[harshita]

great rhythm.... nicely written :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you!!! :) :)

[ayesha gupta]

it was great. nicely penned.

[Eleanor]

Bohot pasand ayi mujhe ye :)
This tells you can express your emotion so nicely in any language!
Aur iska title itna acha hai.
Great work really :)

[Sanjh]

mere bhai isse achhi hindi poem aaj tak nai padhi. bahut touching hai...:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

arre waah!!! shukriya shukriya.....!!!! :) :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Atisundar kavyatamak abhivyati. Dil ki gahrayiyon mein utarkar likhi gayi daastan ka ye abdaaj-a-byaan umanda hai. Kaash! Yayi hindi font bhi hote iss nayi naveli rachana main...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

aapka tahe dil se shukriya..........yaha hindi ki lipi swikrit nhi hai anyatha ye hindi me hi preshit karta...... :) :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Tab to aanand ki koyi seema na rahti
Aur na hi rok pate charam aanad ko...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

satya kaha........kaash kuch dino me aisa mumkin ko jaaye!!!

[M.A.Rathore]

Insa allah

[Pushkar Prabhat]

insha allah

[hardeep sabharwal]

Bahut khoob,

ab dil kar raha ha k ma bhi hindi me kuchh post karu, bahut achha laga ye sweet poem parh k

thanks for sharing :)