Love.......[backspace]

Love........<backspace>

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 2014

It has been a while now,

Staring at the screen,

Browsing through my timeline:

Uninterested.

Checking the chat pane:

Refreshing it,

Again and again.

So many thoughts ,

So many questions,

Too many doubts.

I feel a void,

Void inside of me,

Eating through me.

Helpless,

I am searching for something.

Something,

To fill this void.

But what?

I don’t know.

There,

I found you:

Online.

I feel strange.

 No, its not the divide,

Between my mind and heart.

Its a fight among,

Mind,

    And mind,

             And several,

    And heart,

             And heart,

                      And several.

Pieces of a mirror.

I open the messenger,

Though reluctant,

I want this to end.

I type,

My heart,

My mind,

My soul.

Whew! I feel light,

Complete;

Content.

Still staring,

Reading the message:

Again and again.

Stupid me,

Unnecessary this,

Tab......tab......backspace.

Tab....’h’....tab......’i’.........enter.

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And here it starts,

Growing anxious,

Yet again.

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Reviews

[Penny]

Something one experiences almost daily- in this techno age. Very nice layout and language is god too. I am currently going through a turbulent and confusing face in my relationship so..
Well done.

[Linda alexander]

A unique outlook, many may relate, very interesting write

[MsJewel]

Your words are simple and relatable. What I like most about this is the unique way you formatted your poem. Creative and yet easy to read. The flow is superb.
It's always a pleasure to read your poetry.

:) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much for this wonderful review. coming from you this means a great deal to me.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

This captures life's journey through scenes that play out...Simple, but has stunning affect! I like the form, the repeating image and the progression, the draw of the title, the relatability.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

wow! amazingly kind review! thank you so much.....:)