Moon Be The Witness

====Moon Be The Witness ====
copyright © pushkar prabhat, 2014

In the hush of the night,
We will sail away at midnight.

I know the moon will be watching,
But then, someone should know.
Let him have a tale to tell,
But don't worry, he won't crow.

In the hush of the night,
We will sail away at midnight.

To a land far far away,
Which society is yet to corrupt.........
Yet to be disarrayed.
To a land where we could be a part,
Instead of just being a tool to be used.....
Or sheeps to be preyed.

In the hush of the night,
We will sail away at midnight.

There we will build a world of love with love.
A world where the mind will be free.
A world where emotions shall matter, prized.
A world where "letting live" will be the only decree.

In the hush of the night,
We will sail away at midnight.

For them, whose mind is free,
Who could still dream and dare to live.
Let moon guide them to us each night,
Who have hope and who believe.....

In the hush of the night,
We did sail away at midnight.
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Reviews

[D]

How beautiful. :)

couldn't help, but remember Iron Maiden's song "Rime of the ancient mariner "

don't know why though.

Another favorite from you

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks you so much............the compliments doesn't get any better........glad you liked it so much........ :) :)

[D]

You're welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

"In the hush of the night,
We will sail away at midnight.

To a land far far away,
Which society is yet to corrupt......... "

[Blue]

What a sweet promise. Nights are the most romantic time of the day, with the moon as a witness to lovers' escapades and affairs. It's a good idea that you repeated the lines: In the hush of the night,
We did sail away at midnight.

Keep up the good work!

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is sweet and slightly sad and wonderful Pushkar :)

[Sami Khalil]

I have heard the hush of the nights and set the mind free from daring frights...A splendid poem....:)...................

[Linda alexander]

There we will build a world of love with love.
A world where the mind will be free.
A world where emotions shall matter, prized.
A world where "letting live" will be the only decree.

Well written poem, and great write, sailing with moon towards the better places where harmony and justice prevails, enjoyed it

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much for this kind review!

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, my pleasure, take care