Free my Mind

About the freedom of thoughts and imagination.

Don't clog my mind
......with your scavenging thoughts.
Don't blok his way,
.......with barricades of righteousness.
Don't govern his flight,
......with your induced beliefs.
Do not sentence him,
.......to a prison of obsolete knowledge.
STOP!

Let him, breathe truth,
.......feed upon facts.
Let him, be inspired,
........imbibe nature.
Let him, wander around,
.......in meadows of freedom.
Let him, create a castle of thoughts,
........in a world of imagination!
LET LIVE!

Author's Note

I have attempted something new
Please point out my mistakes and please tell me if i did succeed.

Reviews

[Karen]

I find this poem very interesting and liberating. There is always a sense of constriction when others attempt to squelch individuality and uniqueness, especially for the artist. While art is everywhere, there are many who shun it as a waste of time and attempt to confine our expressions, and sometimes they do this simply by their reluctance to accept our art. Now, I'm not sure if you wrote this for or about artists but it's how I interpreted it; and I agree with Sami, the image of castles of thoughts is great!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much for this kind and insightful review......and yes i wrote it for all the artists.......and also for those free spirited persons whom other people don't understand and the sad thing is that they don't even try to......!

[Karen]

Indeed the saddest part of it is that they don't even try. It hits hardest when these people are people that are close to us and yet cannot relate artistically; it's like they're missing out on a big part of who we are.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

So true.....it feels like you are voicing my feelings! And yes, that is what hurts the most.

[Linda alexander]

Fantastic write, this how we need to guide new generation as open minded, for that we should be open minded, enjoyed, take care

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

oh and I wrap myself in the cloth of life as I read this!! Well Done!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wow! Thank you so much for this kind visit and wonderful review! :):)

[Richa Verma]

This is so wonderful.
I really like the theme and message.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much......i am glad that you liked it! :):)

[Richa Verma]

Haha......you are welcome!:):)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a very uplifting poem.We want people to give us a chance to live our lives.They lived theirs and made their mistakes and refuse to let us do the same.Lovely poem

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot. .. ...and truly said, people wont ever understand us!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well said my dear.You are welcome:)

[Rehan Roy]

A brilliant expression of a real freedom with a flair and a flow.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much for this kind review Rehan. :-) good night!

[Rehan Roy]

You are welcome...:)

[Rehan Roy]

Subh ratri, Pushkar.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Shubh ratri....:):)

[MsJewel]

Let him wander around in meadows of freedom
Let him create a castle of thoughts in a world of imagination
Let Live!

Your words are quite powerful and I do agree - let live!

:) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much.......i am honoured by your review. :-) :-)

[Penny]

Very nyc poem. Despite being a first it does not awkward at all. Has a very good flow too. Well done.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much penny. You reviews always delight me!

[Scott Metro]

I liked this...throw off the chains...
Good one my friend.....enjoyed the read very much.

Scott

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much sir. It means a lot.

[Sami Khalil]

This was sooo good and powerful. I like the idea of castles of thoughts. That would be a good title for a poem...All splendid...:)..........

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much sami.....i was actually waiting for you to review this. You are very encouraging!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure,...Any time...:)..................