Let me cry......

Let me cry......

A Poem by Pushkar Prabhat
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Tale of troubled times.

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At times when i am sad,
When the days have been bad,
My smile too when seems heavy,
And my soul looks shabby,
Its then when i want to cry,
Shout out loud, punch the walls and cry.
But something, i know not what stops me,
It holds back tears, but does not pity me,
I try to move on and forget,
but harder that i try, the harder does it get,
Its then in dilemma of which way to go, i want to
cry,
This time though in sobs, under supressed muffled
voice, cry.
Still but never a drop rolls,
My eyes fill, but no drop falls,
Then i stop, push my pain aside and try to smile,
Tears and sadness follow, accompany,
And i set my foot towards the next mile.....!!!

© 2013 Pushkar Prabhat


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i relate to this...cry during movies, but in real life...it seems the tears just don't come...maybe life, maybe already shed too many tears...maybe the emotion stays pent up...

lots of emotion in this...or lots of pent up emotion would be more apt.

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this insightful review and this kind visit sir. It means a lot!



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I really love this poem, especially the last word ;O haha. And I like the image of this poem. That we must go on, no matter what happens and that we don't forget our smile, beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much :-)
BubblingMe

10 Years Ago

your welcome ;)
Sometimes it actually helps to let it go and just cry.Life is hard sometimes and it takes a lot of effort to keep a smile on our face.A very good poem :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much :-)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome:)
Cries of sad tears for past tales and dilemmas...I hope the new year will be a better one...A splendid poem...:).................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much sami......i too hope next year be better for both of us!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

OK. You are welcome...:)....................

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Added on December 13, 2013
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Pushkar Prabhat
Pushkar Prabhat

Bhagalpur, India



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