Free Fall

.....under the gravity of love!

There is something about you,
Unknown, unnamed, undiscovered; Divine.
That like a quill,
I keep falling, freely,
In arms of your love.......
Towards eternity.

Reviews

[D]

Something from your first. It's quiet exciting to see where you've started from, and where are you now :)
Seems to me you're already one of the best, from the start, and now only remains to find the right style. :)

What concerns this write. I loved it. Every word was placed in the right spot, nothing was there just to pull out a perfect rhyme or something, it's all well penned, and one can actually feel the lines, which is as good as it ever gets. :) Perfect job here.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thanks you so so much.............for a wonderful review..........kind and inspiring words..........hope with your help......i will find that style soon........thank you!!! :) :)

[D]

my pleasure :)

[Richa Verma]

short nd sweet dscription of the dpth of true love:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot dear........! :):)

[Richa Verma]

most wlcme!

[annabellee]

what a lovely poem. Short but yet so emotional.
loved it :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much.....:-)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

This was wonderful...I like it alot...:).......................

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot sami :-) :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Scott Metro]

How powerful the feminine...a curse of the Gods...a blessing from the Gods.
How can we as mere mortal men survive ? Perhaps just surrender...do what nature demands then hide least we be found again.
Enjoyed the read my friend,

Scott

[Pushkar Prabhat]

So true.......very well said! I am glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you sir for this great review!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sweet,sweet,sweet!!!!!Your words are like music to my soul:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much.... :-) :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Nicole Williams]

there is no better feeling than falling in love,
its powerful, and frightening and exciting all at the same time.
Beautifully depicted in your poem,
bravo.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much for this kind and insightful review!

[BubblingMe]

I like freefalls but I recognize that this is a poem about love, nice written

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot... :-)

[BubblingMe]

Your welcome((:

[Penny]

Dis poem is divine. Thnx for sharing..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much penny!

[Penny]

Ur welcum.