Sparkling Eyes

About the pair of eyes i love the most!

For your eyes,
what shall i say,
except, that if emeralds were to ever exist in brown,
then they surely had only one way.
and that is as your eyes,
see, how beautifully beneath your eyelids, they lay.
they widen they squeeze,
and are sure to enchant one, when they come to play.
indeed, deep they are as ocean,
where memories float and emotions sway.
i see your eyes and then see nothing,
'coz i get lost, in the thousand things they convey.
well, i might not fall short of adjectives for them,
even if i speak for night and day.
but that, to see them sparkle for me, for once,
is all i wish, and to god, i pray.

Author's Note

How did you like it?

Reviews

[Leena Madhuri]

this is too good seriously! love it!!!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much........so glad you loved it........!!!!! :) :)

[Linda alexander]

then they surely had only one way.
and that is as your eyes,
Great write, I can see those eyes clearly through your painting with words, it is sparkling too for poet, enjoyed

[Vidya Bacchus]

What a lovely expression of love for someone,Their eyes haunt you it is truly lovely:)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much:-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[zainul]

Your prayer for seeing the sparkle of eyes for you is a very decent way to express your heartfelt love.
I appreciate your tributes to the holder of those magical eyes.I hope her heart is also as beautiful as those eyes.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much for this wonderful review........and indeed her heart too is precious!

[zainul]

I am very happy to learn this.
I hope you will win her heart through your pure love,devotion,qualities and capacity to support.
Have a nice time.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you for your kind advice! As a matter of fact i have won her love!
You too have a great day!!

[zainul]

Congratulations both of you!!!
Enjoy the pleasure of divine love!!!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so very much!!!

[zainul]

You are always welcome!

[Sara S.]

"indeed, deep they are as ocean,
where memories float and emotions sway."

This was my favorite part of the poem. I absolutely love the way this poem is just about how you see the way from where people see the world (their eyes, of course).

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much for this amazing review! Glad you liked it!!

[Scott Metro]

This is very pretty..your words tell of your love and the power those eyes have over you.
Are we not weak for such things...and are we not glad that we are?
Enjoyed the read.
Scott

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you for your time and your kind words.
yes, its amazing how we all love this weakness in us. Glad you enjoyed it!

[MsJewel]

The eyes are the window to the soul.
Your poem is lovely!
:) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much......glad you liked it!

[Penny]

Very nyc poem, i wonder if i hv such eyes:-P

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much and i believe each pair of eyes has its own beautiful story to tell!!

[Penny]

Awww.. i am flattered.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

:-) a lot of aww moments today!!!! :-p

[Penny]

True. Very true.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Yup! :-) :-)

[Sami Khalil]

It is easy to get lost in those magical eyes and lose our identification...A splendid poem....:)..................

[Pushkar Prabhat]

That is so true.......thanks a lot.....really grateful to you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................