Fingerprint

A thousand grooves made nude
is nothing but a Lover's maze.
I ravish every turn in absolute.
Designed to never temper
and seemingly untouched -
Each time a new unknown
and every avenue unused.
Safety in the form of rims and ridges
Grown soft by our abandon.
I trace on you your every printed strand -
My love both born and buried in your hand.

Reviews

[ifyourehappyandknowit]

That was just beautiful. Very sweet and to the point. If you ever decided to write some good descriptive pieces or stories I would be very interested in reading them. Your voice is prominent and is absolutely beautiful.

[Elvis Gilley]

You have a great talent for imagery. That in itself is gift but coupled with the ability to finish the thought completely is great. Needless to say I loved it. Great job keep up the good work.

Fav Line
Desined to never temper
and seemingly untouched

[M Breen]

I interpreted a mysterious landscape discovered by zooming into the fingerprint. Mystery and love in the overlooked corporel everyday. Excellent ideas and images. Thanks!

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice poem.
I like the last two lines the most.

[thenakedverse]

thanks for reading!! i really appreciate it, i love getting input

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.