Your Riddle
A Poem by thenakedverse
Does not the sun hide
shadowBehind
his shield of light?Can not the eyes be objects of Your blindness or
your sight?Do
tears not fall in graceful blissbut also when in grief? Can memories be
blessingsor a present-stealing thief? Does fear or fast
desirespeed the pulse at every measure? Does steady
breath grow shallow when in pain or quiet pleasure? Can not bullets claim
an ending and yet also mark the start? Does love, in time, not hold the
strength to hurt and humor heart?For one are two and two are one but each can make
it true.I’ll never know enough, my dear, to know which
one was you.
© 2012 thenakedverse
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This is the second one I read, which angered me, because it was, I believe, much better than the first, which I gave a 99. I believe this to be exponentially better than the first, so 100 isn't a good enough rating. It actually made me feel very inferior as a poet, still I must applaud you for this art.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
wow, I am very flattered. please do not feel inferior.
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11 Years Ago
I'm wondering how you ran across my stuff... I noticed on your page you wrote 'i'm new', that made .. read moreI'm wondering how you ran across my stuff... I noticed on your page you wrote 'i'm new', that made me laugh, that was on my page until two days ago...
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Added on November 29, 2012
Last Updated on November 30, 2012
Tags: love, riddle, dichotomy
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