Who I am.

Who I am.

A Poem by I'llXloveXherXforever

I'm jealous.
Self conscious.

Over rated. 
Out dated.

Over weight.
Made to hate.

An escape goat. 
A bad joke.

A burden.
A loose end.

A rusty anchor. 
A wait on any ones shoulders.

A shy guy.
Not afraid to die.

A waste of space.
With an angel that fell from grace.



 

© 2012 I'llXloveXherXforever


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Wow I've never see anything like this but it was amazing. I live how you used your own style to get your feelings out in a beautiful piece

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'llXloveXherXforever

12 Years Ago

true feelings but you always know what I'm getting at. your the professor to my zoiburg lol
Great last line.
Each time the first line would come out I was having trouble believing that a second line was going to rhyme with it. Impressive.
The last stanza just gave it a whole separate twist that made me rethink he whole poem. Flowed nice, nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'llXloveXherXforever

12 Years Ago

thanks man means alot
Flowed nicely, few spelling mistakes, and relate able

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'llXloveXherXforever

12 Years Ago

ahh what are yuh gunna do

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I've Been looking for a way to get out emotions other then writing in my journal because even if I wright in it its still not really letting it out. more..

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