Her name is all I need to think about when I want to be happy.
A is for the way I will Always love her. L is for the Lift off my heart takes when she comes near. Y is for the fact that it may be Young love but its strong enough to go the distance.
First off, I love the description, I bet a million of us can relate.
As for the poem I enjoyed the style and form, I think it's great how you used her name and singled out each letter and gave them their own word and meaning.
Great choice with "Always, Lift, and Young" those three words have infinite meaning.
Great idea, great poem, great job
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thanks buddy! Just my way of trying to find the right words to show her how much she means to me. Th.. read moreThanks buddy! Just my way of trying to find the right words to show her how much she means to me. There is alot one could do with that great name.
M is for the Most perfect boy I know
I is for the Incredible way you make me feel.
K is for every Kiss we share.
E is for Everyday is perfect when we're together.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Mike must be the luckiest guy in the world. Do him and I a favor and please never let us go.
First off, I love the description, I bet a million of us can relate.
As for the poem I enjoyed the style and form, I think it's great how you used her name and singled out each letter and gave them their own word and meaning.
Great choice with "Always, Lift, and Young" those three words have infinite meaning.
Great idea, great poem, great job
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thanks buddy! Just my way of trying to find the right words to show her how much she means to me. Th.. read moreThanks buddy! Just my way of trying to find the right words to show her how much she means to me. There is alot one could do with that great name.
Wow. I'm impressed. You had the name twice and you still managed to say what you wanted AND not only that but you made it sound great. Amazing job
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thanks man I actually have a journal with a bunch of things like this. I go to milbury to catch the .. read moreThanks man I actually have a journal with a bunch of things like this. I go to milbury to catch the views and write in my little black book.
I've Been looking for a way to get out emotions other then writing in my journal because even if I wright in it its still not really letting it out. more..