Shark bait

Shark bait

A Poem by Thelostgirl22
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#Antibullying

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I cant remember much nowadays

Now that my brain has seem to gone away

But I still get flashbacks

Which causes me to fall down into that big crack

You may not admit it but you caused me so much pain

The tears that I still cant contain


You made me have a mental warfare with myself

I hope you're proud of yourself

You made fun of my intelligence, you made fun of my weight

You made me full of self hate

I was walking of eggshells around you


Everything was always so dark

There was too many sharks

I being the only prey

And being left astray


Bite after bite, they take a part of me

As I lie there cold and alone in the sea

Till there is nothing 

But the sheer memory on the few who cared

As the realisation has left a sting

They couldn't tell I was being eaten alive

They didn't realise I couldn't survive

© 2022 Thelostgirl22


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Deja vu. I know I've seen this title before and I am sure I read this poem as well. But I guess not. I liked the way you explained yourself in this write and how you kept a damaged soul theme on repeat, it really drives the emotion in this write. Nicely penned. tyfs I like the title too, it reminds me of Finding Nemo. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thelostgirl22

2 Years Ago

Thankyou I appreciate that and I know as soon as I wrote the title I kept thinking about finding nem.. read more



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Deja vu. I know I've seen this title before and I am sure I read this poem as well. But I guess not. I liked the way you explained yourself in this write and how you kept a damaged soul theme on repeat, it really drives the emotion in this write. Nicely penned. tyfs I like the title too, it reminds me of Finding Nemo. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thelostgirl22

2 Years Ago

Thankyou I appreciate that and I know as soon as I wrote the title I kept thinking about finding nem.. read more

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Added on January 30, 2022
Last Updated on January 30, 2022
Tags: young adult, teenagers, mental health

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Thelostgirl22
Thelostgirl22

United Kingdom



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