what the hell is wrong with me

i dont know whats been wrong with me lately...

i cant explain y i feel the way i do

so i avoid ur calls and texts

i act as if i dont know u

u leave me messages

i know that ur mad

but please dont take it personal

if i dont answer back

im not what u think of me

constantly i compete

with the image u keep of me

im fallible, irritable, and i cant stand u sometimes

i love u 2 much 2 tell u

so i lie

sometimes i need to be alone

other times im desperate 4 ur companionship

or the knowing that ur there

please 4give me

and i understand if u dont understand

cuz u dont deserve the person i am

 

 

Reviews

[Enigma]

Wow!! That was good. I can relate to the first part of your poem. I've been through it...
The whole concept is new to me as I've never read a poem on such topic. And well, this was the first and the best...lol
I enjoyed myself reading it and at times I felt the words calling out of the computer screen.
The last two lines were kind of different. I expected a happier anding to this. Try ending the poem in a more positive way. Remember it's just a suggestion and the poem is good in it's original from too...
Well done!!....and keep writing