who the hell cares??? can u hear me out there???

who the hell cares??? can u hear me out there???

A Poem by theladyjai
"

should be going 2 class...

"

im addicted

need a prescription

the cure

someone who listens

invisble sickness

tired of existin

not livin

so much bottled up

like pop thats been dropped

bout 2 explode when u open the top

i need 2 know u listened

 

© 2008 theladyjai


Author's Note

theladyjai
thank u 4 reading...im goin 2 class now

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straight forward and the rhyme scheme seemed rugged like the feel of the poem - good stuff

Posted 16 Years Ago


I listened your message is very clear but would read much better in proper english withot the textspeak

Posted 16 Years Ago


hope its a good class.

I listened and heard you loud and clear.

Dawn

Posted 16 Years Ago



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theladyjai
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I am a student currently at OSU. I have been writing since I was little but I have yet to complete a full story. I have alot of good ideas that sometimes over take me ( I have occasional ADD) and I wa.. more..

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