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its sad when u start 2 get use 2 being disappointed so much so that you're not hurt or surprised by it anymore

i tried 2 luv u

the way i wanted u 2 luv me

the way i would love u

if u were me and i were u

did everything i thought was right

kept u when u were sick

held u when u were hurt

made ur burdens my own

but still u plunged a knife

n2 the heart that wouldve bled 4 u

down thru the thinnest

held u up thru the thickest

yet in still u betrayed me

like u said u never would

shattered visions

of a world with us 2gether

y am i the only 1 hurt

when its u that aint got ur s**t 2gether

u know my faults

my insecurites and problems

i was upfront and forward

in return u were deceptive

lied about who u were and what it was u wanted from me

i thought i could luv ur represenative

nice 2 meet u finally

and not the person u thought i wanted u 2 b

no regrets over us having met

i know im better off

next time ill actually listen 2 that lil voice

 

Reviews

[Anya]

very f*****g sincere. i cant actually say much for the writing tho....altho im sure if you edited and revised it a bit it would be alot smoother....
but the way you expressed yourself is brilliant, i have to agree with all of that because ive felt exactly like that and im sure alot of other people have as well.
all together a good piece, keep it up!