Ch. 10 Numb

Ch. 10 Numb

A Chapter by theladygraceling

Will gets out first
because I can't move.
He opens my door
and says my name,
quietly first.
"Riley..."
But I don't move or speak.
So he says it again.
"Riley."

"..."

So he says it again.
"RILEY."

I feel numb.
My legs won't do
what my mind is telling them to.
I don't know what to do.

I speak
because he looks worried.
"I can't feel my legs."

And because he's that kind of friend,
he unbuckles me,
picks me up,
and carries me into the house.


© 2014 theladygraceling


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I am seventeen years old. I have always loved reading and have recently started writing my own stories. I also enjoy drawing and sculpting, have taken piano and violin lessons for 10+ years, and have .. more..

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