Carnival

hidden carnival

Gorgeous masquerade
hidden visages entice
infatuation

Author's Note

my first haiku, thought of it while trying to sleep. Please, tell me what you think :)

Reviews

[Zahra]

Beautiful senryu. Perfect in form.

[Marie]

Very good haiku; perfect syllable count.

[theking]

Thank you for reviewing some of my pieces :) it's a great honor from such a prolific writer like yourself her on the Cafe :) I really appreciate it. When I get to a computer I'll be sure to perform the same courtesy to you! Thanks

[Marie]

You're quite welcome.

[Larul]

Nice imagery. Sweet, short, and full of descriptive words. Nothing wrong with a haiku! Especially on your 'first' try.

By the way, don't we all hate when our brains do that? Hahaha.