Away From Me

more grains from the hourglass

splinter in my blood

I've drifted away agian

drifting

leaving

 

when my eyes clsoe

I don't see it again

its so clear in my thoughts

I'm gone

 

this forest in my mind

bombarding of what is called "life"

ambush of thoughts

bring me back

I'm gone

 

I need to be away

leave me in these questions

it takes me away

away from me

 

another curse

it haunts my being

reality just a word

that thing

it's in me

it's here again

where it always has been

that thing

again

 

It'll always be

It'll always not

I'm gone, away

that thing

away from me

Author's Note

please review. and my other stuff too. thanks.

Reviews

[sutoraika]

you've got so many reviews man, how cool is that? awesome! keep it up!

[postscriptheart]

I like this luv....I've been here...you've captured it...simply...nicely done.

[Deborah Shepard]

deep , many horros possbily inlife the shutdown mode..love and light

forest intrigues me

[Lena M. P.]

Powerful. Sometimes the horrors of life are so strong that we shut down. I liked the part about the forest in my mind section. Well done.

[ToxicTears]

I really like this, it reminds of being a soldier in war!! The first word again on the 3rd line needs to be corrected...u have agian...lol.....i do it all the time!

[Lady Lazarus.]

It'll always be
It'll always not
I'm gone, away
that thing
away from me

is my favourite part.
incredible.
very deep and almost an anxious feeling to it.
fantastic poem
xxx