"Painful Procedures"

"Painful Procedures"

A Poem by thejohnphenomenon
"

this is an abstract sort of poem.

"

here

there

bare

brought to his lair

cursed and unfair

 

lo

behold

his hold

breaking the mold

just like it had unfold

open

his soul

sold

so blank

cold

hearts again

fold

 

nevermind me

I'm just trying to breathe

the gripping sea

need

I need to see

heed!

my warning wreath

seeds

 

crossed out

hustled out

overwhelming doubt

need it now

a new route

not route

route

sorrow

pout

 

looms

closer it blooms

vroom

not now

stop!

it's noon

not now

not now

doom

ow

 

 

 

© 2008 thejohnphenomenon


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yeah, really good choice of words. hehehe

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like the creative words that u have used! Very nicely written.


Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 27, 2008

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thejohnphenomenon
thejohnphenomenon

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sup they call me john. i like the arts. literature film music that old chestnut. I'm 17 ive been writing since I knew how but I've only been taking it seriously for about a year please review my stuff.. more..

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