Rain//Sunken

With this piece, I'd hoped to capture a little of my feelings towards someone – a real person.

RAIN//SUNKEN

I lived in a tropical kingdom, and you;

in the United. My winter was full of rain

and yours was full of me, but

now it's congealed so that

you were the rain,

the highlight of my season,

and I only wished 

to 

be 

yours

I hear you speak of her �" beautiful, 

clever, yours;

I pretend to not care, but 

inside, 

it is the distance between 

one and eternity;

and 

it

hurt

If I were a poet, I would write it down;

If I were a painter, I'd have painted it out �"

But I am only a little anchor;

heavy with sadness

So

I 

sank. 

Author's Note

What are you opinions on spacing between words? Do you count it as a legitimate kind of skill, or is it just a fancy add-on?