For My Love

I might have written this to you, but now I share it, for you.

There is no wish I need to make
For you were brought to me by fate
We surrounded our hearts into eternal fire
Living like devils on the brink of desire

My love, if not for you I would have fallen
Without a breath my life forgotten
With you near I live with unlimited happiness
Always surrendering to our muted passion

I adore you, in an amount I thought impossible
I could never ask for a better lover
If today be our last day together
Know, that it will last forever

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Neatly crafted and you have a amazing poet in you, good job

[MAC]

it is fine the way it is, an honest love poem. poetry is whatever you want it to be. excellent!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok Iike it but the meter and rhyme is all over the place! It needs crafting to make it into a true poem.

[Arthur Henn]

A tribute of love written for that one special someone... Januel (What a wonderful finish, them last two lines...