How are we feeling today?

Dug up.

 

lost

scared

never There.

never entirely Together.

and I still hold your hand when It’s warm.

look at that you're Leaking. Feels wet. Feels dry.

feels unput uncleansed feels remote.

Feels kind of like the word

            What

what

            love.

That slang that dirty purpose.

Feels like a gunshot a hairpull a hysterectomy

a triathlon a bottle of cheapo wine and a god

complex smile you’re on the air. howling.

A battered brain. that. can’t. seem. to. let go.

 

please just goddamn f*****g love me

Reviews

[Mr Whiskers]

Overall I liked this. The blatant emotions, the untraditional form and phrasing....some of it didn't come clear until the second time thru, but then maybe that was me. Still, I liked it.